Boring...
The drawings were too quickly drawn. Take your time and do a good job. You can also use "smooth" when you draw your lines. What the hell did you use? "ink"? Dont do that next time. Also the dialog was too close to the actual game. Change it up some more and maybe it'll be funnier. Also get a better mic. I could barely hear the words. And dont breath into the mic or talk so loud into it! It seems that you tried so hard to make snakes voice so you boomed it out. Overall...I give it a 3 out of 5. Try harder next time...